Admin Fix typos These are the typos Adsynth and myself cannot fix.
*edit* PLEASE leave this here while I move the typos over, they will only move if it is in the same forum *edit*
NOTE FROM DONKEY: I will be making comments in blue for each of these as I fix them, or if I have questions about what/where the typo is supposed to be
The "!!11" should presumably be "!!!!". Looks like the shift key popped back too soon, resulting in the last two exclamation points becoming ones. Or maybe Galen got to it :)
Where: Facility management page for any drone factory
What: popup on "Raw Materials"
Old text: Once of each raw material listed is consumed each time an output item is created.
Suggestion: One of each raw material listed is consumed each time an output item is created.
Reason: It should be "One of", not "Once of".
Old Text:
You walk up to the window of this strange, crystalline prison. A small, green, pitiful-looking face smudged in grime stares out at you from behind the bars. A tiny purple tear streams down it's face as it beckons you closer and begins to speak.
Suggested Text:
You walk up to the window of this strange, crystalline prison. A small, green, pitiful-looking face smudged in grime stares out at you from behind the bars. A tiny purple tear streams down its face as it beckons you closer and begins to speak.
Reason: Its is the possessive pronoun, it's is a contraction of it is or it has.
Your doppelpet facility Drone Factory #5050 in Sector 422 has experienced a reactor core breach due to severe neglect, resulting in its complete destruction!
The doppelpets assigned to this facility have died in the explosion. They were too weak from exaustion to escape.
Suggestion:
Your doppelpet facility Drone Factory #5050 in Sector 422 has experienced a reactor core breach due to severe neglect, resulting in its complete destruction!
The doppelpets assigned to this facility have died in the explosion. They were too weak from exhaustion to escape.
Correction: Either remove comma entirely, or put it before the "and."
I would lean towards removing it entirely. Grammar nerding: Commas only go before "and" between two independent clauses, and the second one seems to be dependent here. It's hard to tell, though, because neither clause actually states the subject.
Either way, putting it after "and" is definitely wrong.
